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Post by smogemogirl323 on Jun 6, 2004 16:34:19 GMT -5
really cute fic Tommy. a great story. :)BHGIRL
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Post by Tommy on Jun 7, 2004 2:47:56 GMT -5
cute? You think so? I wouldn't have said cute but it's your opinion.
*Sighs* k that was my most depressing chapter and [totally off my usual chracter] i nearly started crying when C walked out on M... usually i'd just laugh and say shame on him but... NYI
oh well....
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Post by Br on Sept 12, 2004 22:12:11 GMT -5
I think its a nice dramatic fragment of a story but you should finish it to get other peoples opinions
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Post by Tommy on Sept 13, 2004 2:13:52 GMT -5
Yes yes I know I know... but i usually go on how well the previous chapter is taken. So far I have very little reviews on that matter!
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Post by Blossa on Oct 12, 2004 6:08:43 GMT -5
Okay lets see Josie is 15 in a 27 yr olds body! Shes married has a kid! And kissed Lucs and now her a Vaughn are fighting FUN!! Great story thoughn!!
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Post by TheKat on Oct 12, 2004 13:10:24 GMT -5
Sounds interesting, can't wait to read.
Kaytee
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Post by Tommy on Oct 12, 2004 13:18:06 GMT -5
*does cheer*
I didn't want J and V to fight coz I'd already had that with Corrine but....it made sense at the time.... and so did that sentence
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Post by TheKat on Oct 12, 2004 13:26:03 GMT -5
cool, read some very good.
Kaytee
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Post by Tommy on Oct 12, 2004 13:44:16 GMT -5
Thanks Kaytee!
One thing I love more than singing/acting/writing: People praising my singing/acting/writing.
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Post by TheKat on Oct 15, 2004 21:53:44 GMT -5
Ohh, I can't wait so see what happens next! Keep up the good work ;D
Kaytee
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Post by TheKat on Oct 16, 2004 13:56:01 GMT -5
Tommy I am addicted to your story. Hehehe, I just read what you posted and I have to say it was sweet, sincere and soooo good! Keep it up!
Kaytee
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Post by Blossa on Oct 16, 2004 22:57:37 GMT -5
Shock and horror i think im getting it! Is josie dreaming all of this?? And Lucus has a girls friend?!?! Can't wait for the update!! Blossa
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Post by Tommy on Oct 17, 2004 13:35:51 GMT -5
um.... dreaming.... sort of
She's half been taken into the wormhole....like her mental state.
Corrine's kid is coming next chapter hehe..... Josie's going home soon. I've nearly finished!
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Post by TheKat on Oct 17, 2004 20:44:41 GMT -5
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!WHY IS IT ENDING??? WHY? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!IT CAN'T BE FINISHED, IT CAN'T NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!OK, I just have to except that it is finished and not coming back. I can just re-read it over and over and over and over.....who am I kidding..... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!OK, I'm good ;D Really good ending *sniff* Tommy, I really *sniff* enjoyed this ;D Kaytee (ahh, I'm ok) **I trust you wouldn't do this in any other board, right? **
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Post by Tommy on Oct 18, 2004 2:22:59 GMT -5
It's finished.... voi la
What do you think?
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