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Post by Kitten ♥ Lovell on May 16, 2005 13:51:01 GMT -5
Heh. The best part is, I actually read it the night before! What can I say; some of my tasks at work are rather monotonous, and my mind wanders to more interesting things like BHH. That's usually when MY story ideas come to me. Gee, and I thought school was bad. (Oh god! I said gee!!!! I shouldn't have taken on 'Grease' without relearning english101!) Oh dear.... I have chapter 3 written but I don't like it. I'll sort something out later. I'm posting chapter 3 of 'There's no such thing as angels.' Stand by
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Post by jennasrules on Jul 31, 2005 18:00:00 GMT -5
You must update sometime soon!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Kitten ♥ Lovell on Jul 31, 2005 19:07:51 GMT -5
There's no such thing as angels. Aw heck I forgot about this. I'm going to post all the remaining chapters now. Nobody else is gonna review it!
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Post by ParanoidConspirist on Jul 31, 2005 22:32:14 GMT -5
That was a great story. It had real emotion and you could relate to each character with what they were going through. Plus the events before what happened in "Allure" made it more complete. Keep up the good work!
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Post by ShIvErS! on Jul 31, 2005 22:43:51 GMT -5
I've already told you, that story is very good. I like it mainly cause there aren't many fics were Marshall is the "star" so this made a good change. Oh, some psychologists would be very interested on Lucas and Josie2 relationship. Something like, he didn't get the real deal so he setled with the next best thing. Lol, or maybe not.
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Post by And the rest is history!~ on Aug 1, 2005 5:46:38 GMT -5
Wow, this story was really good. I loved it from the beginning to the end. I thought the ending was very sweet and funny, too. It's one of those stories that are sort of meant to teach you a lesson but it's also really fun to read. Well, I sort of saw it that way because of the whole, "believe in angels, if you want," and it was just really really good! I hope you write more fanfics soon! And Shivers was right. I loved how Marshall was the main character because he usually does get left off to the side. Keep it up and writing! Hope this review helped!
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Post by jennasrules on Aug 1, 2005 8:43:44 GMT -5
Aesomeness!!! LOVED the new chapters. I'll admit, when that truck came i was half expecting Corrine to go to where Marshall was. Still, it was a good ending!!!
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Post by Kitten ♥ Lovell on Aug 1, 2005 16:29:33 GMT -5
Aesomeness!!! LOVED the new chapters. I'll admit, when that truck came i was half expecting Corrine to go to where Marshall was. Still, it was a good ending!!! Nah.... I couldn't kill Corrine. It'd mean more chapters. And it's long enough. Don't mention psychology people, HS will have a field day. For some reason I have a Josie2/Lucas thing going on... I don't know maybe I'm insane(r) than the others here. Marshall/Corrine stories don't seem to go down as well here, which is a shame. Marshall's an interesting character to write about.
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Post by {88Keys} on Aug 1, 2005 21:18:17 GMT -5
Well written, good story...for Marshall/Corrine. It was a bit sappy. Actually...it was a LOT sappy. But an interesting idea about the supposedly "dead" people being kind of stuck between worlds. And I agree that the Lucas/Josie2 stuff was just as interesting as the main plot. True...I think Marshall tends to get the least amount of screen time of the 5 Science Club members, so more stories about him would be good. I just wish they didn't have to include Corrine as a love interest. But hey, it's your story.
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Post by Kitten ♥ Lovell on Aug 2, 2005 16:56:41 GMT -5
Well written, good story...for Marshall/Corrine. It was a bit sappy. Actually...it was a LOT sappy. But an interesting idea about the supposedly dead people being kind of stuck between worlds. And I agree that the Lucas/Josie2 stuff was just as interesting as the main plot. Everyone knows I'm hopelessly sappy at heart. If a little morbid, depressing and strange sometimes. With the Josie/Lucas/Vaughn triangle Corrine and Marshall do tend to get ignored a bit. Although... I reckon you're right. Marshall gets ignored more.
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Post by tamisat on Jul 22, 2006 18:21:55 GMT -5
Amazing!!! this is Brilliant, One of the best i've seen on here. well done! You don't see many compleated m/c stories, so this is extra special!
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