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Post by Ben Fogle on Oct 27, 2003 18:47:02 GMT -5
Well, I can see that a lot of people have read this, and Mirror Card hasn't posted a replying topic, and don't hate me for putting one up before you, please , only I really wanted to know what people thought. Be as critical as you like, there is always room for improvement.........
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Post by MirrorCard on Oct 27, 2003 18:58:27 GMT -5
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Post by Simpler on Oct 27, 2003 20:07:03 GMT -5
Ah it's driving me crazy (in a good way), I love all the confusion between Josie/Vaughn/Lucas. I could tell by reading that it was racking the characters heads off, and as well as mine! It's driving me mad! Mad I tells ya! (again, good way!) MORE PLEASE!
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Post by HailStorm on Oct 28, 2003 5:58:09 GMT -5
Awwww! You've already heard my response yesterday (it involved lots of gushing and at one point, bowing). It's brilliant! The Lucas/Josie/Vaughn stuff is really sweet and sad and frustraaating. And the characterisation is spot-on (I love the way Marshall tries to reassure Lucas, while looking doubtful... it's sooo... Marshall-y!). I'm going to have to pull my socks up and get writing, or you'll zoom past me writing-wise! You rock, kiddo! Keep it up!
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Post by Ben Fogle on Oct 28, 2003 13:53:27 GMT -5
Finally, I've finished it. That took me a while. I wrote so much, and then hated it, or decided it didn't fit the way i wanted it to so.....it's been hard
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Post by Manda on Oct 28, 2003 14:48:37 GMT -5
Yay! My very first post and me loves it hunny! A very good reason for having all that emotional turmoil stuff too- I wish I could think of clever things like that. I look forward to reading your next one... no pressure, of course
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Post by Ben Fogle on Oct 28, 2003 15:24:06 GMT -5
Next one? *hyperventilates* I have a previous one, but I don't know about next one for a while!
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Post by HailStorm on Oct 28, 2003 15:49:02 GMT -5
Yay! manda join! Wooo! *hits manda with polystyrene Janeway* Indigo, I love it! It really is sooo sweet and so well written! I love it to bits! *huggles* You rock! I really should continue with my fics soon... but that is irrelevant.
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Post by MirrorCard on Oct 28, 2003 22:07:47 GMT -5
*eyes what Vaughn, Josie, and Lucas think about in science club*. ah, it's that kind of story... hum... good job. nothing i really disliked. Sort of a neutral feeling with me. I think it's the emphases on love in the fanfictions right now.......
ah, i finish the first entry then the next day there are two new ones! *faints*
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Post by Ben Fogle on Oct 29, 2003 8:15:17 GMT -5
*eyes what Vaughn, Josie, and Lucas think about in science club*. ah, it's that kind of story... hum... good job. nothing i really disliked. Sort of a neutral feeling with me. I think it's the emphases on love in the fanfictions right now....... * Yes, it was that kind of fic, and I'm not terribly pleased with the whole thing being based on relationships, but I feel I needed closure on the whole thing. And I realise now, that Lucas isn't too interested in Josie as a girlfriend, but hey, it fittd nicely in the fic. I wanted it to end more upsetting than it did, but I suppose it needeed a happy ending, and not too many people would be pleased with everything ending badly.
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Post by HailStorm on Oct 29, 2003 8:30:30 GMT -5
I didn't really mind the fact that it was all about relationships. It's written well enough for you to get away with it. I'm keeping all the shippy-fics under my hat right now, wanting to write more plot and character-driven things. I have too many ideas for them to start worrying about writting shippy-fics. I'm looking forward to reading a plot or character fic from you, Indigo, maybe we could write one together? (we tried o talk about it earlier but I can't remember if we ageed - we ended up just doing Victor 'impressions' )
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Post by scofield on Oct 29, 2003 9:49:17 GMT -5
I like it! Its good! I love the love triangle thing! Really creative! Make a continuation for it...
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Post by Ben Fogle on Oct 29, 2003 10:17:07 GMT -5
Nah. I'm done with relationshipy ones. The next fic that I write, if ther is a next one, oooo , will be based on science and the characters. If something 'nice' happens on the way, it will be because that is the way the fic has to go....for progress.
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Post by MirrorCard on Oct 29, 2003 15:15:00 GMT -5
read the last two, they were good. some of the things i laughed at:wow! Indigo, I don't think I really wanted to read that last sentence in there, you don't need to write about that j/k It would have been ultra funny if Corrine was like, "Stop acting like this is some 30 minute tv show." *hahahahahahaha*. before i read that, i was kind of thinking this sort of thing seems a bit soap opera-ish *lol* and you actually wrote it.
Marshall with tea, hum..... perhaps Lucas, I'd think Prof Z or Corrine would be more insteresting in Tea.
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Post by Sylphide on Oct 29, 2003 20:02:35 GMT -5
Great story!! I loved it!!!
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