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Post by xmirrorxreflctionx on Feb 2, 2006 18:06:07 GMT -5
Ok so I've posted the first chapter to 'I Always Will Be.' So what do you guys think? What do you like about it? What do you think I could improve on? Feedback would be great!
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-Riiss303-
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Post by -Riiss303- on Feb 3, 2006 7:36:08 GMT -5
I like it soo far,update soon!
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Post by Peaceout on Feb 5, 2006 14:20:30 GMT -5
i really like it.good fanfic
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carshall
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Post by carshall on Feb 9, 2006 0:22:55 GMT -5
I like it, and I love that shoe is on the other foot now.. Marshall knows how it felt for Corrine to watch him waltz around with Diana.. but I say the boy gotta crawl, before he can walk.. he need to do some James Brown type begging..PLease Please Please..
Yeah I know thats probably why Im single.
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Post by Peaceout on Feb 9, 2006 15:58:15 GMT -5
I loved it.I liked how she finally told Marshall about the mirror the whole song thing.This is a really good fanfic
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Post by strangedaysfan14 on Feb 9, 2006 16:16:30 GMT -5
Wow i like it its awesome
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Post by xmirrorxreflctionx on Feb 9, 2006 17:28:06 GMT -5
Ok I'm hoping this will work. This thread has banned me from it which is quite perplexing seeing as I started it...I hope this posts.
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Post by MirrorCard on Feb 10, 2006 0:50:17 GMT -5
You cannot be banned from individual threads. It is possibly a cookie problem on your computer. Hit the reload button on your browser and make sure you are logged in.
If your IP address rotates to one that we have on the ban list, than you would be banned until your computer changes IP addresses again.
Oh, the quotation marks in your story are getting messed up when you post. Try pasting your story in Notepad, then recopy it from notepad and paste it in a post.
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Post by xmirrorxreflctionx on Feb 10, 2006 19:05:33 GMT -5
Ok thanks a lot MirrorCard! I think the thread's letting me get back in again. Oh and thanks for letting me know about the whole quotations getting messed up in my posts. Thanks!
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Post by MirrorCard on Feb 12, 2006 11:49:16 GMT -5
The quotations and appostrophes are still messed up. What program are you typing it in?
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Post by xmirrorxreflctionx on Feb 12, 2006 14:22:28 GMT -5
Argh. I'm typing it in Word...I'll go and try and fix it.
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Post by Peaceout on Feb 13, 2006 11:15:35 GMT -5
Another good chapter.Great job
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Post by xmirrorxreflctionx on Feb 13, 2006 11:21:18 GMT -5
Ok I think I've finally fixed the whol messed up quotes problems in the chapters. Hopefully it won't do that again.
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Post by xmirrorxreflctionx on Feb 13, 2006 11:22:16 GMT -5
Thanks everyone for the great reviews!!! I'm glad you guys like it! Just to let you know, there will probably be a total of 8 chapters so only three more to go!
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Post by xmirrorxreflctionx on Feb 20, 2006 11:21:02 GMT -5
Alright! Sixth chapter up! Sorry it took me a while to update! I went out of town and didn't have access to a computer! But here's the next chappie! Rate and review please!
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