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Post by xmirrorxreflctionx on Jul 29, 2006 20:30:02 GMT -5
I wasn't sure if you wanted us to post reviews on the actual story thread or not so I made this just in case you wanted everything seperate.
I really like this story so far. Since Conclusions I've been warming up towards the possible romantic relationship between Vaughn and Corrine. So this is a nice breather from the multitude of the typical ships out there ((Hopefully I won't sound too hypocritical. I do write mostly C/M, J/L fics but I really am taking a fresh perspective with C/V which, sadly, sounds more logical than the others)) Anyways, this was a good first chapter and I hope to hear the rest from you!
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Post by HailStorm on Jul 30, 2006 5:38:41 GMT -5
oooh a C/V story... a rare breed indeed. I haven't really formed a solid opinion about your story yet as I have a feeling that it hasn't fully gotten going yet - what you've posted so far is the sound of the engine ticking over but soon the stort will actually start going places I like the idea of Corrine going to university in England... although I'm not sure it's something I can see Vaughn doing what with is mum just recently having come back. But it's not SO unbeleivable that disbeleif can't be suspended.
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Post by erika on Jul 30, 2006 8:20:31 GMT -5
I'm not sure it's something I can see Vaughn doing what with is mum just recently having come back. the downside of me not seeing conclusions. I was planning on explaining why he went off to england in a later chapter, but now that you say his moms back, I don't think that explanation would be very valid. Nevertheless, I'll try to figure something out that ties his mom into the story. thank you xmirrorxreflctionx for creating this response thread ;D
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Post by Peaceout on Jul 30, 2006 9:46:22 GMT -5
oops sorry about writing my response where your story was. I totally forgot. It was a good story and I cant wait for more CV. Love it
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Post by xmirrorxreflctionx on Aug 5, 2006 19:34:59 GMT -5
Loved the second chapter! Poor Marshall....his little heart has been crushed to pieces. Feel sorry for Josie too. I can't wait to see what adventures ((and possible romance???)) await Corrine and Vaughn in England! Update soon!
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Post by HailStorm on Aug 7, 2006 12:22:56 GMT -5
Oooh an update I've been looking forward to one. You're doing very well with keeping us guessing - it's hard to tell exactly where things are going to go and how it will turn out, which is a good thing. The stuff with Lucas breaking the glass was good... it seemed quite real and true to character somehow. It's always nice to see IC writing that doesn't heavily rely on catchphrases and repeating things from the show. So yes, good stuff
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Post by And the rest is history!~ on Sept 16, 2006 11:18:18 GMT -5
Hey Erika! This is a really good fanfic. I feel bad for Josie and Marshall but I am excited at what might happen between Corrine and Vaughn. You definitely keep up the mystery in your writing, though, which is great. Lol. I also think that you might have had something go on with Professor Z, too, because he seemed kind of hesitant to talk to Marshall about why he was running late at night. Well, keep up the good work and please update soon!
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Post by Rod on Nov 1, 2006 22:30:55 GMT -5
Hi Erika,
You need not apologies for the length or the time since your last post, as we are being entertained by your story for free.
As in the past you have a flair for the story line and I especially like "Corrine Avenue" and the way Vaughn showed it to Corrine. I have great empathy for Lucas and his conflict with Josie. Lucas needs to find a place and time, were he can have a one on one talk with Josie. He needs to tell her everything that he has had so needed to say to her for a very long time. If this can happen, maybe they can start over as friends and see were time will might take them...
As always, I look forward to your next post...
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Post by erika on Nov 2, 2006 20:45:52 GMT -5
Thank you so much Rod, I appreciate you taking the time to say a few words.
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Post by Rod on Dec 2, 2006 19:58:42 GMT -5
Thanks Erika for the new chapter. I see that Lucas has not worked out his feelings for Josie and things are worse. I like the twist with Corrine and Greg, sounds like Vaughn does not like what may or may not be coming on with them.
As always will look forward to your next chapter. If I don't get a chance later, have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year...
Rod
PS. I don't thank Opel believes that I only have the one address for Emma, oh well...
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Post by opal on Dec 5, 2006 10:04:32 GMT -5
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Post by erika on Dec 5, 2006 15:04:46 GMT -5
Thanks again Rod. And if I don't get a chance also, Merry Christmas.
And Opal, thanks for the review you left on the other thread. Also I'm sorry to hear about your teacher, she obviously doesn't appreciate original thinkers like yourself. And when you ask me to cheer you up, what would you like me to do.
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Post by opal on Dec 6, 2006 3:50:06 GMT -5
Thanks for comfort Erika
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Post by artemis on Dec 6, 2006 3:56:05 GMT -5
I can cheer you up Opal. I really enjoy your signature. Can you change it? I wanna have Clemence Poesy on my signature. Look at this She's beautiful isn't she?
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Post by opal on Jan 2, 2007 10:17:07 GMT -5
Guess what? My darling teacher who thinks I am stupid, today said that I've a bad presence, my diction is terrible and repeated I think illogical. She gave me very bad note and derided me by all class. I cry all day because I can't believe it. She asked many pupils but didn't say something like this to anyone. If I were more cheeky I'd tell her whom she is but unfortunately I'm not. By the way she is a vice- principal of school so imagine my sadness. What I must do next? Now I'm depressed...
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