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Post by MirrorCard on Oct 26, 2003 11:24:33 GMT -5
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Post by MirrorCard on Oct 26, 2003 11:26:01 GMT -5
oooo, the super longness.
We've got to find a place on Fanfiction.net.
will read and reply later, will probably be tuesday
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Post by scofield on Oct 26, 2003 11:52:48 GMT -5
The story is awesome!! I like every part of it!! [Im not kidding!] I especially like the part where Principal Durst tells Mr. Pearson she was in a trance then woke up and she was sitting on Professor Zs lap! HAHAHAHAHA!! Youve really got a creative mind!  Continue it from that part of the fic... |
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Post by HailStorm on Oct 26, 2003 12:37:06 GMT -5
It's a cute little story and the dialoge is really well written (and the science stuff is quite technical, me=impressed!) but... I personally prefer to read stories written as prose as opposed to scripts (unless there's detailed stage directions etc.), but that's just me being fussy  |
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Post by Simpler on Oct 26, 2003 19:40:32 GMT -5
Very cool story!
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Post by MrsInvincibLe on Oct 26, 2003 20:33:46 GMT -5
haha..durst might be a bit to heavy to sit on z's lap..hehe..well, thats what my bro thinks
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Post by Ben Fogle on Oct 27, 2003 9:24:19 GMT -5
It waas a nice story. The sciencey stuff was good!  |
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Post by Laura on Oct 27, 2003 15:05:22 GMT -5
Thanks u guys
I dunno why but I find it easier to write it as a script, but next time I will definatley just write a narrative!! It took wAAAAAAAy too much time!! ;D
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Post by MirrorCard on Oct 27, 2003 15:28:38 GMT -5
i thought it was really thought out.
The Janitor's role seems a bit too large though. Josie and Vaughn without Madison isn't very believable.
If you're fine with the script format, i'm alright with it. There are some advantages to having it.
*hehe* Professor Z running out of Durst's office. amusing to picture.
(though i believe fanfiction.net frowns upon scripts)
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Post by MrsInvincibLe on Oct 27, 2003 15:33:19 GMT -5
Hey, Laura! Can I do 'Emotions 2'?
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Post by Laura on Oct 27, 2003 15:40:43 GMT -5
Of course Im looking forward to It!!! ;D ;D ;D
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Post by MrsInvincibLe on Oct 27, 2003 15:43:52 GMT -5
Thanks!!
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Post by scofield on Oct 29, 2003 9:34:41 GMT -5
Emotions 2 was cool!! |
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Post by MrsInvincibLe on Oct 29, 2003 18:01:49 GMT -5
You think so? I tried very hard!!
Cubby
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Post by scofield on Oct 30, 2003 2:58:32 GMT -5
Yup! It was fine...Dont worry...  ;D |
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Continue it from that part of the fic...
