Responses to: Black, Black, Black

[MirrorCard]

Warning: My contain cussing, if that's alright.

well, my opinion would say no to this. Since it is a fanfic though, i'll leave it to your best judgement about what to use. However, the majority (all but 2, i believe) of the curse words (and other words some of us have yet to figure out why they are there) are on the banned list and are automatically edited by the boards, not us moderators.

[australasia]

are you a goth?

[DarkestFate]

Define Goth. The way I look at being Goth is not by the way you dress, but how you veiw the world around you, how you think. If you mean goth as in dresses in all black, hates everything/one, or anything that fits most Goth stereotypes then no.

[HailStorm]

Not bad so far
The entries are a little short (mind you, that increases the chance of MirrorCard actually reading them *ducks poly-kate*) and I have reservations about your OC - just please be very careful not to let her turn into a Mary-Sue

[MirrorCard]

The way I look at being Goth is not by the way you dress, but how you veiw the world around you, how you think

wow, super-deep. it's like, those who only dress the part, instead of thinking it as well, only look to be different by copying a stereotype and therefore actually become part of a normal instead of achieving difference. I so see that everyday at my school.

(mind you, that increases the chance of MirrorCard actually reading them *ducks poly-kate*)

that was totally unexpected. ducked poly-kate, i see. oh, look HailStorm, seagulls! *mwhahaha*

[MirrorCard]

ok, i just now read over it HailStorm.
I could see it. the 1st entry was quick through it, but the second entry was there (or so i thought). you've also made the format of the story different than a lot of other fanfics i've read (i forget what it is called, but you've made it so it isn't the one where the writer tells all the characters' thoughts and actions, but only the thoughts and actions of the one character), so there's a different reading to it.
saying "kewl" as opposed to "cool" gave a personality to the character.

[DarkestFate]

HailStorm said:

just please be very careful not to let her turn into a Mary-Sue

Who is Mary-Sue?

[HailStorm]

A Mary-Sue is a fanficing term for an OC gone wrong - if you google "Mary-Sue" you will probably find lots of esays that explain a lot better than I can and plenty of fics that use one (usually actually called Mary Sue) to mock people who write them in all seriousness.

[DarkestFate]

Ohhhhh..... I'll try...I like to add drama to things so they are (unlike my life) intresting. Dancia is bascially who I want to be. But sadly she's only a figment of my imagination! I use her in most of my fics where she's either Danica Hanson or Danica Byrd or Danica Shardae (Ok, Ok, Danica Shardae may be the name of the main charrie in Hawk Song by Amelia A T w a t e r -Rhodes..but MINE IS NOT A SHAPE SHIFTER!) But anyway, I'm glad u ppl like it.

[DarkestFate]

By The WAy!
I jsut updated it!
(3-24-04)

[MirrorCard]

I lost the site and turn out the whole time my sis had it in her faves...))

i was wondering what happened to you.

thanks for telling me about the update

[MirrorCard]

DarkestFate said:

I noticed that someone was standing behind me and I jumped...literally. It was Lucas, God, Doesn't He Ever Go Away? I thought.

*lol*

DarkestFate said:

"What Do You Want, Lucas?" I said, spitting out his name as if was venom.

wow, powerful (well at least i thought that was)

[DarkestFate]

Thankies!