Post by Gouki on Jul 15, 2005 3:14:44 GMT -5
Yeah. This fic does need a bit of explanation, originally it was a pseudo sequel, that took place between chapter 10 and 11 of my first BHH fic, Aftermath--but still be able to stand on its own. Aftermath was also written having only seen two BHH episodes, Invisible and Magnet, so it wasn't very good.
This was an experiment to merely look in at the characters, and try and disect what they feel and who they are, at the same time challenging other peoples views, and just being plain trippy.
It's definitely not to everyone's tastes and that is part of the reason why I'm posting it hear to gauge a reaction. That and, unlike my other fics doesn't rely on slash (despite a few hints) or subjects that shouldn't be posted here.
I'll be surprised if anyone has major objections to this, beyond the Corrine chapter. In my mind, Corrine is a very conflicted character, and the chapter, in my opinion, holds more resonance when taking Corrine's questionable alleigances into account.
I should add in here, that I was pretty depressed when In started writing this. I found the Lucas chapter easiest to write, but I never had any real sturggles except with Vaughn which took me the longest to write. I really hope that in some way this fic strikes a personal note--it should make you connect.
Like I said it's my favourite and I'm proud of it. So, please review it, but, at the same time, don't just review it to say things like 'ZOMG!! ITS T3H H4RD +0 UND3R5+4ND!!!oneoneone11!" Actually write something worth reading.
Yeah, and who do you think the mystery voice in the Josie chapter is? It's pretty obvious. While on the topic of the Josie chapter, it's a lead in both to chapter 11 of Aftermath and an ongoing plot in Insomnia. Which will not be posted here, I'm afraid.
For relevant reading: Aftermath is here. And the response thread is here.
This was an experiment to merely look in at the characters, and try and disect what they feel and who they are, at the same time challenging other peoples views, and just being plain trippy.
It's definitely not to everyone's tastes and that is part of the reason why I'm posting it hear to gauge a reaction. That and, unlike my other fics doesn't rely on slash (despite a few hints) or subjects that shouldn't be posted here.
I'll be surprised if anyone has major objections to this, beyond the Corrine chapter. In my mind, Corrine is a very conflicted character, and the chapter, in my opinion, holds more resonance when taking Corrine's questionable alleigances into account.
I should add in here, that I was pretty depressed when In started writing this. I found the Lucas chapter easiest to write, but I never had any real sturggles except with Vaughn which took me the longest to write. I really hope that in some way this fic strikes a personal note--it should make you connect.
Like I said it's my favourite and I'm proud of it. So, please review it, but, at the same time, don't just review it to say things like 'ZOMG!! ITS T3H H4RD +0 UND3R5+4ND!!!oneoneone11!" Actually write something worth reading.
Yeah, and who do you think the mystery voice in the Josie chapter is? It's pretty obvious. While on the topic of the Josie chapter, it's a lead in both to chapter 11 of Aftermath and an ongoing plot in Insomnia. Which will not be posted here, I'm afraid.
For relevant reading: Aftermath is here. And the response thread is here.