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Post by Z Fan on May 30, 2006 23:39:21 GMT -5
Tell me what you think and if you want more. Criticism is Welcome!
~zfan06
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Post by lazerxangel on Aug 10, 2006 19:46:23 GMT -5
;D Please! Continue! I just found the story, and I like it. It's sort of like...an episode in one of the seasons. Please update! Even if no one else wants to read it, I'll be your fan.  lol |
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Post by Z Fan on Aug 10, 2006 22:51:08 GMT -5
Woo! I have a fan! I appriciate the review and I'll continue, I'd decided to anway.
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Post by lazerxangel on Aug 11, 2006 17:29:41 GMT -5
Ah well, I hope other people like it, because I really do like this story. It's so nice and sweet! Hmm...I wonder if the Janitor will appear near the end. *suspenseful music* ;D
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Post by lazerxangel on Aug 13, 2006 17:44:58 GMT -5
Aww...yay! And everything's fixed once more. Nice theory on the Pearadyne explosion!
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Post by Z Fan on Aug 13, 2006 18:32:04 GMT -5
Glad you liked it.  Thanks for the reviews. Couple chapters to go. |
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Post by middleton39657 on Aug 16, 2006 2:05:19 GMT -5
Nice theory on the Pearadyne explosion! It kinda goes in a circle though. The Pearadyne explosion which created the wormhole was caused by Josie, Corrine, and Z going through the wormhole. It's just... awkward, in a way. |
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Post by Z Fan on Aug 16, 2006 9:54:51 GMT -5
True, but so many other things in the series do the same thing. ....I can't think of any right now though, so maybe not...Anyway, thanks for the reviews. |
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Post by lazerxangel on Aug 16, 2006 16:33:55 GMT -5
Yay! Great story!! I can't wait to read the sequel. ;D
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Post by middleton39657 on Aug 16, 2006 18:18:21 GMT -5
You're welcome
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Post by beppy71 on Aug 18, 2006 13:57:52 GMT -5
I really liked the story. Very creative. How did you think of it? I give it 'five stars'! I'm excited about the sequel. I loved it when Lucas thought Z was all broken up because a girl dumped him. ;D lol
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Post by Z Fan on Aug 18, 2006 15:57:19 GMT -5
;D Thanks so much for the review. Woo for 5 stars! I can't really tell you how I came up with it. I just kinda did. Thanks again for the review!
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lol
Thanks for the reviews. Couple chapters to go. 